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Pantoum

pantoum · form · validated

Interlocking quatrains in which the second and fourth lines of each stanza become the first and third of the next. The checker verifies the line interlocking only, not metre or rhyme.

Provenance

  • Source: Traditional; adapted into French from the Malay pantun in the 19th century
  • Attribution: traditional — classical or folk; no single origin to name
  • Checkability: self — decidable from the text and its parameters alone
  • Attested: codified — formulated as a rule by a tradition rather than declared by an author

Details

  • Kind: restrictive
  • Languages: en, fr
  • Requires: tokens
  • Deterministic: yes
  • In other languages: Pantun (de), Pantoum (fr)

Prompt hint

Carry the second and fourth lines of each quatrain into the next as its first and third.

Examples

interlocked

en — this text satisfies the procedure.

a
b
c
d
b
e
d
f

Source: constructed example; the form is adapted from the Malay pantun

broken-interlock

en — this text does not satisfy the procedure.

a
b
c
d
z
e
d
f

Source: constructed counterexample

pantoum-leconte-de-lisle

fr — this text satisfies the procedure.

Ô mornes yeux ! Lèvre pâlie !
J'ai dans l'âme un chagrin amer.
Le vent bombe la voile emplie,
L'écume argente au loin la mer.

J'ai dans l'âme un chagrin amer :
Voici sa belle tête morte !
L'écume argente au loin la mer,
Le praho rapide m'emporte.

Source: Leconte de Lisle, 'Pantoums malais' V, in Poèmes tragiques (Paris: Lemerre, 1884); opening quatrains via fr-academic / superprof, not collated against the 1884 edition